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Critique Trade? Witch Battle SceneCrista held her fist up signaling the others to hold position. She looked around a moment surveying the area. She motioned the two to her position.
“Remember to be careful where you step. That’s how she got me in the first place.” Crista spoke quietly as she was looking around the corner.
“Got it.” Tristan and Ethan responded.
“Ready?”
The men nodded. Crista signaled with her hand for the guys to split off in separate directions. They would flank Ming, fast and hard.
The three charged in as planned, they didn’t want to give Ming any time to react.
“Woah…. Shit!” Ethan barely avoided a magic trap practically tripping over himself.
Whirling around quickly, Ming flipped her cloak behind her before levitating into the air. She started flinging fireballs at anyone she could target. Her movements seemed very focused, as if she was expecting company. As she was tossing fireball after fireball, she started chanting her first in

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I entered a photo competition and i  need help from the dA community to win... 
in return i will give YOU a watch, llama, faves and coments if you go  check out my journal and vote for me, then just comment on my journal so i know i have to check out UR page. I WILL ALSO CRITIQUE your art if you wish!

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I have paintings that glow in the dark with youtube videos of how they "magically'  change from daylight to glow in the dark that I wanted to share. I wanted to post my latest painting with the group. It also comes with a short story I put together. It rhymes all the way through and is about Santa Claus and the North Poole. here is the link to my art piece/story, you can click on the link under the picture to watch the video. thanx.

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